Dradian Far Runes

Ooh, cool! Very descriptive! And a nice return to the style you had going in the first place... ^-^ Probably the only thing Mr. Realms would recommend changing "orangey." Its ...

Despite its obvious lacking of imagery, this poem was compelling. It was the meaning, the feeling, the beautiful simplicity, that pulled me in, and turned the wheels inside my head. ...

Me again...^-^ This story is becoming very interesting, D. Very well-written! (And original) How are old are you, Durriedog? This could be the writing of a seasoned author, if you ...

I Watch from the Window This wood is etched Across my aging face, Laid on plates of glass, The sill forever my place. . . They came to us at ...

Don't really have time at the moment for a review of considerable length... but I thought I would say "nice job!" because the prose is so well-written, and the story ...

Nice! ;-) Its a simple poem, but a beautiful one, and (thank goodness) free from annoying grammatical errors and such. Very well done! -Realms. (P.S. The only i would change ...

The grass leaks With emerald-green light Which I savour tenderly In my melting brown eyes The sun cries For all its lost, For all its mourned, In its crooked light ...

Words of a Conceited Man Why, hello, dear gents and ladies, Have you a second to spare? Then come here and look – This is my work of art. Go ...

Greetings, this is Mr. Realms, reviewing your excellant piece, "Car Hugs,". Really, honestly, I'm stumped as to what I shoud critisize. If there are flaws, I didn't notice them. Its ...

Greetings to you, my fine-feathered friend, I will be reviewing your piece, “Bubbling,” today, and, hopefully, reviewing it well. So without further adieu…. Overall, I enjoyed what you wrote, bu

This is probably the first poem I'v seen on this site with real potential... it flows well... has that "gut emotional appeal" everyone is drawn to... "shows", dosn't "tell"... has ...

Congratulations, endless secrets, you have created the first story I have read on this site with nothing to criticize. Really, this is pretty much perfect! Its got gut emotional appeal ...

Wow, this is really well-written. The characters are done just right, without any cheesiness or cliches. I like the main character especially. The diologue is also realistic... and the prose ...

This has definantly got potential. Its realistic but odd enough to catch my interest... very good start to a story. Like another reader mentioned, its good with bringing you right ...